SO many authors may have heard while querying, "You need to show not tell." What exactly does that mean? And why is it so important? This post will go over the ins and outs of showing not telling.
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You may not catch it while you write because you can see the scene happening in your head, but so many authors struggle with the ability to show and not tell. What exactly does that mean? Instead of explaining your character is angry, show how they are angry. He clenched his fists together, I gritted through my teeth, my cheeks heated are all examples of showing emotion and how it would look on a person rather than saying, I am mad, she is excited, or everyone was crushed by the news. Simply telling the emotion can leave your story somewhat boring. Readers don't want an info dump with everything explained. They want to feel what the characters feel. To discern the emotions or be able to read for themselves what is going on as if they were with your characters in the story and saw it for themselves. Here are some more examples of showing emotion.
Angry | Happy | Sad |
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Red in the face | Eyes wide open | Tears in eyes |
Jaw/hands clenched | Jumping up and down | Head hanging low |
Hands on hips | Corners of mouth rising | Dragging feet |
Veins popping | On cloud nine | Shaky or quiet voice |
Jaw locked | Laughing or giggline | Trembling lips |
Shocked | Shy | Embarrassed |
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Mouth wide open | Blushing | Blushing or turning red |
Eyes popping open | Looking down | Head hanging low |
Gasping for air | Arms crossed | Hiding face |
Hands covering mouth | Speaking softly | Stomach flips |
Heart beating fast | Hiding behind things | Holding back tears |
Jumping/stepping back | Standing away from others | Rolling eyes |
Nervous | Afraid | Excited |
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Tapping hands or feet | Hands shaking | Mouth wide open |
Butterflies in stomach | Whimpering | Clapping or clasping hands |
Stuttering | Heart pounding | Heart pounding |
Heavy or fast breathing | Biting bottom lip | Huge smile across face |
Lump in your throat | Covering mouth with hand | Jumping up and down |
Hot | Cold | Tired |
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Bright red face | Shivering | Droopy red eyes |
Sweat on face or back | Hugging self | Trying to keep eyes open |
Moving slowly | Blowing on hands | Slouching in chairs |
Panting for breath | Seeing breath in air | Leaning head on hands |
Drenched hairline | Rubbing hands together | Rubbing eyes |
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