Showing versus Telling

Published on 3 January 2025 at 20:26

SO many authors may have heard while querying, "You need to show not tell." What exactly does that mean? And why is it so important? This post will go over the ins and outs of showing not telling.

You may not catch it while you write because you can see the scene happening in your head, but so many authors struggle with the ability to show and not tell. What exactly does that mean? Instead of explaining your character is angry, show how they are angry. He clenched his fists together, I gritted through my teeth, my cheeks heated are all examples of showing emotion and how it would look on a person rather than saying, I am mad, she is excited, or everyone was crushed by the news. Simply telling the emotion can leave your story somewhat boring. Readers don't want an info dump with everything explained. They want to feel what the characters feel. To discern the emotions or be able to read for themselves what is going on as if they were with your characters in the story and saw it for themselves. Here are some more examples of showing emotion.

 

Angry Happy Sad
Red in the face Eyes wide open Tears in eyes
Jaw/hands clenched Jumping up and down Head hanging low
Hands on hips Corners of mouth rising Dragging feet
Veins popping On cloud nine Shaky or quiet voice
Jaw locked Laughing or giggline Trembling lips
Shocked Shy Embarrassed
Mouth wide open Blushing Blushing or turning red
Eyes popping open Looking down Head hanging low
Gasping for air Arms crossed Hiding face
Hands covering mouth Speaking softly Stomach flips
Heart beating fast Hiding behind things Holding back tears
Jumping/stepping back Standing away from others Rolling eyes
Nervous Afraid Excited
Tapping hands or feet Hands shaking Mouth wide open
Butterflies in stomach Whimpering Clapping or clasping hands
Stuttering Heart pounding Heart pounding
Heavy or fast breathing Biting bottom lip Huge smile across face
Lump in your throat Covering mouth with hand Jumping up and down
Hot Cold Tired
Bright red face Shivering Droopy red eyes
Sweat on face or back Hugging self Trying to keep eyes open
Moving slowly Blowing on hands Slouching in chairs
Panting for breath Seeing breath in air Leaning head on hands
Drenched hairline Rubbing hands together Rubbing eyes

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